Instead of: Being reluctant participants, the game
facilitator decided to debrief at length.,
Write: The
game facilitator decided to debrief at length because the participants were
reluctant.
Instead of: Originally designed as a
simulation about cultural diversity, we have used this activity to explore how
outsiders are recruited to join a team.,
Write:
This simulation was originally about
cultural diversity, but we have used it to explore the ways in which outsiders
are recruited to join a team.
Instead of: Based on these four barriers to
complex dynamic decision making, we designed an instructional and learning
strategy
Write:
Using these four barriers to complex dynamic decision
making, we designed an instructional and learning strategy
Instead of:
Summarizing it briefly, participants in BLEND (the original ILE) play
Write:
To summarize, we can say that participants in BLEND
play ...
Instead of:
Based upon current recommendations for gamifying classrooms (Sheldon, 2012), a
course at Syracuse University was gamified by adding
Write:
Using current recommendations for gamifying classrooms, Sheldon (2012)
gamified a course at Syracuse University by adding